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The One Lost Love by dethdrummer34406

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The One Lost Love

dethdrummer34406

A period Piece of a romantic love triangle set to in the theme of the 1950's film noir look.
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3 Comments

RenderingGlintFilms said:

Haha the cars and sneakers =P . Still good !

NakedBoyProductions said:

i agree. its a good project, but since it is a period piece, id try and keep the current day automobiles out of the shot as much as possible.

mallrat said:

wow, this video is very very good. both the technical and conceptual aspects were well honed in this video. lots of respect to you from me for using black and white. the only problem i had with the whole thing was the terrible use of the zoom. this is a little filmmaking hint that will help you in the future: the zoom is for pre-shot only!!! if you use the zoom in a shot, zooming in or out, it flattens the space of the image, making it look very corny. pre-plan the shots very meticulously so that you don't have to use it during the shot. otherwise, very very good job, this is my favorite one so far.

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Submitted: on November 17, 2008

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