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flyhighguy said:

nice man i realy like it i agree wth chad and the while eye line bit at the beginning. and personallly im nto a fan of the old voice over but stil really good m8 better than my work lol. got my vote

RenderingGlintFilms said:

You have my BIG epic vote. This was great. Was it shot on film or just a 35 mm adapter?

Chadith said:

well done man. the direction of the eye lines in the bit at the beginning (stalker in car, girl outside) are a bit confusing. it's hard to tell where they are in relation to each other. they were both shot very well individually, but the cutting between them was a bit confusing. Maybe its just me, but I think she could have been covered from either inside his car, or behind it, (voyeuristic) just to clarify the layout of the scene. Cool short tho man. you've got my vote. Chad Knutsen

JoeDestruction said:

Very well done, a dark insight into a troubled mind. Nice job!

rustedsigns said:

I really like this film. Very well executed.

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