Tell me LIES by Bridge

It is a Personal Narrative Project for university. Some parts of my life which my life were made by them. 

Totally, I'm not satisfied of the result of project but in some points I do happy about the way that I did it. It is my first experience in After Effect and I've learned many things to make 'tell me LIES'. I really want to continue my learning in this part. However, please let me know about your critics. I'll think about your comments and indeed it can help me to improve myself for ahead projects.