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Cybaria

An emotional story about a a lonly girl in a world a world not so far from our own.

It is a world full of people, but she is unable to connect to any of them.


Here is the youtube link for HD Quality

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MeKIHscO5vk

Cybaria

Cybaria

YOBIFilm Contest Entry

The top finalists will win a spot on an original YOBI.tv webseries!

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10 Comments

rustedsigns said:

the intentions of your film are good but there is too much talking... it was like an essay that you went out and shot a few scenes to read it over. and take a break from reading it for a bit... let the images sink in. otherwise it will be hard for the viewer to really get what you want to say.

CarlOnFire said:

Fantastic. I loved every moment of it. Great music and voice-over.

ankitm7 said:

Brilliant theme and voice over, however film lacked in the visual elements. A film with just voice over needs to have a strong and powerful visuals to impact the viewers and also the gaps that have no voice and just sound effects. But a great film still.

EKMM said:

Hey thanx for saying so! and congratz on your video as well! The satire was brilliant, and i loved how well edited it is

DaveDaveDave55 said:

Not bad but i have a few problems with it. The main one i have is the voice over, sure it's nice sounding and maybe arty or whatever you want to call it but it is telling too much of the story. Film is a VISUAL medium and when a whole characters journey is told through a voice over then its just lazy film making. With feature films voice over is generally used well, but in a short film where you only have about 5 minutes to tell a story, a voice over is just the easy way out. The second problem i had was that the main character wasn't in anyway likable, all she ended up doing was complaining about people using their mobile phones or something. If the character was old, and it was set on her balcony as she physically watched youths as they passed by then that would be a compelling visual story. Sorry if this sounds harsh or if this comment is too long, I just see that you're a finalist and thought i'd give my opinion.

roxygaga said:

cheer up you are young you make a good film too i give it 4

KirstySkywalker said:

Heyo!!!! I am Kirsty Skywalker, from gaia.com :D i saw your siggy while watching our rp topic... and i registered as fast as i could! i will make sure you win!

Sivartis said:

Very good entry! It's so refreshing to see an actual film on here :-) Great work! ~Trav

drkvPremium Member said:

Congratulations!

SJeeShow said:

One of the greatest vid I've seen so far ! There was so many great shots, and the voice of the girl is so calm and intense. I really wish you the best for this contest !

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Submitted: on July 19, 2010

Contest: YOBIFilm Contest

Tags: car, college, Connection, Cybaria, Goulding, Kathryn, liam, norton, park, Proudcitons, Redux, Sheffield, Unavailable, Walters, youtube

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