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YOBIFilm Season 2 Semifinalist loz113

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Lawrie Phillips
Cambridge, Cambridgeshire, England
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YOBIFilm Season 2
Week 6 Semifinalist

Hey everybody!

My name's Lawrie, i'm 19, from Cambridge in England. I love film, and am currently finishing a vocational course in it at my local college before heading off to uni next year to do more of the same!

I just want to get some of my work out there and see what everybody thinks. this seems like a good place to get some feedback and from what i've seen there's a good community with a lot of talented filmmakers kicking about.

so please, get in touch, give me feedback on my stuff. Ballards Gore was shot on a non existant budget for college. it's the first thing i've uploaded so any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated 

cheers!
Lawrie

loz113's Winning Entry: Ballards Gore

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A young man offers his thoughts on Life, Love and Smoking.
This is a short film centred around a monologue that i wrote for an actor friend of mine. It is my final submission for college before i head off to Uni next year. (hopefully!)
There is some bad language in it but i've cut it out in order to comply by the rules of this website. Hopefully it still makes sense.
Please feel free to comment, constructive criticism is always appreciated
 
Full Credits:
James Harvey (main character) - James Mullarkey
Camera, Writer, Director, Editor - Lawrie Phillips
Boom Operators/Grips - Alec Houghton and Ben Phillips
Shot on a Canon XL1
Edited Using Final Cut Pro
(Equipment courtesy of Cambridge Regional College)
 

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fandrix said:

this should be a semi-finalist already!

Maverick said:

Fantastic film mate. Best of Luck.

RenderingGlintFilms said:

win!

Chadith said:

your actor was great. I like how you shot it too. Nice job. well written as well. Good stuff for both your reels. Good luck, Chad Knutsen

flyhighguy said:

i have to apologize i was logged into your account and meant to send it from mine

loz113 said:

i love this you are amazing film student the best I've ever seen. I'm sure u will go fare. a cant fault it shame the language has to be cut but still well done.
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