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The Fire by ChrisTPmusic

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The Fire

ChrisTPmusic

The song was composed for the person who is in love with a person who has lost the will to love.

Lyrics

No one can explain all the tears in your veins

these fears their drivin you insane

the pain, the pain

im behind the doors of the room you darken

come on just let me in

waiting, waiting;

cause i can i see the fire

cause i can see that spark

I know your heart drained from all the shit and these games

how the tortured memories still remain

butim here, im here;

cause i can see the fire

cause i can see that spark

ChrisTPmusic

Christopher Thomas Pizzute
Dumont New Jersey United States
Composer
www.facebook.com/pages/Chri...

YOBISing Contest Entry

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21 Comments

ChrisTPmusic said:

came so far yet... oh so forgotten. :(

Nory said:

real talent, i hope your hard work pays off dude. voted :)

ChrisTPmusic said:

Thx man. i take tremendous pride in trying to make each word in all my songs have a specific and focused meaning.

patomotown said:

Beautiful song bro... this is a grammy winner here!

PhotoTyler said:

nice! voted, hope you vote for my photo!

Darkangelmcr452 said:

Omg! You so amazing!TOTALLY FOT MY VOTE...marry me?!

ChrisTPmusic said:

sorry if i havent answered anyone for the past three days, i was away on a trip to Rhode Island.

ChrisTPmusic said:

GODS OF WAAAAAARRRR!!!!!!

TheAdjectiveNouns said:

got my vote

ADDenhanced said:

Everybody reading this comment right now. This just scratches the surface of what this kid can do with his voice. I work with him and you should hear how he sounds at work. May your hammer be mightyyy

ChrisTPmusic said:

WOW!! thx guys for the positive comments and interesting responses to my style of playing. I love it and thx for the support. I've been voting for all you guys!!!!!!!

Linvandra8 said:

Hi Chris, Very nice comments from your competitors.and others. Very intense....I love it. Ittook me a while to get registered to vote, but I'm here now and you can count on my support!

niafisher said:

Hi Chris....i really enjoyed this song, you have a raw quality to your voice which is just wonderful.....i'm also in the yobising finals so figured i'd check out the competition..haha! Just wanted to wish you all the best....Nia.

romrox said:

Chris, I like the grainy dirt, the unorthodox rasp, especially the untamed feelings in your voice. You are comfortably wrapped in your own world, which I enjoy too. Keep up the wonderful work!

BeccaRichter said:

Love your lyrics, very powerful. Congrats on making the finals! ~ Becca

ChrisTPmusic said:

Thank you everyone for voting so far. leave some comments and support

ApaJuan47 said:

Hello Chris, I really dig your sound good voice. Of course, I'm voting for you. Good luck!

ChristopherPizzute said:

thank you elizabeth

Elizabethrdiaz said:

Good luck!

ChrisTPmusic said:

thank you; hope to see you there in the top 10 in January.