I really liked it! You sound like a male version of Yael Naim. I could relate to the lyrics a lot too.

yeah. your definitely right. I know I couldnt of even done as good of a job as you did with singing at the same time. thats a lot of fast playing and singing at the same time.lol. I wish you the best man. p.s things you did with your voice and the tune itself were very unique. keep up the good work!

Yea I agree, the pattern I'm doing on piano is very upbeat heavy so it really needs the support of a band to cover 1 and 3. It's also not the simplest thing to play while singing. Thanks for the constructive criticism.

if you had a full band playing that. with you singing vocal puting everything you got into the vocals. that song could do well. it sounds really unique. I had to give my full opinion. cuase I felt bad for saying piano didnt sound well. sorry>

hey man. I thought that your song was written pretty well, and your voice fit that style you had perfectely. I think you should get a piano player tho, cause it seemed to fast for you to play and sing at the same time. it was off rythem at times, and sounded out of tune and a little square too. but song and voice sounded real good. sorry man. not trying to offend you. just being honest.